#写作批改# 雅思写作中，短语搭配，是个大问题。

比如，persist, 表示持续，可以说a problem persists，而表示坚持，用法则应该是persist in doing sth.

另外一个，是句子意思清晰的问题，请对比原句和修改：

原句：It will be hard for young men to persist when in trouble because they even will not encounter terrible situations with the help of parents and teacher
修改句：Young people may not learn to persist in combating problems because they – with the help of their parents --will not even encounter any major problems in the first place.

#雅思##雅思写作##托福写作##英语写作##托福[超话]#

“Last breath—这是一首非常感性的歌，总的来说，我觉得我现在正在做的专辑和project对我来说都是超级感性的歌。它们非常的私人，很多都是关于我在韩国的经历。”

歌词“One last breath in me
I know you wanna take it away
You got your hands around my throat
So i only breathe when i’m alone”

when you want it the most
there's no easy way out

when you're ready to go
and your hearts left in doubt

don't give up on your faith
love comes to those who believe it

and that's the way it is～

当你最想要它时，却没有什么捷径
当你准备出发，却心存疑问时
不要放弃你的信念
坚信它的人才能得到爱
别无他法

And that's the way it is[微风][微风] https://t.cn/z8A45WQ