#雅培英语# 本周（10月9日）雅思大作文范文-竞争合作类必考题
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各位学霸们好，今天黄老师给大家带来本周（2021.10.9）雅思大作文真题 & 范文，本周考题如下：
2021.10.9真题
Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
1
题目分析/注意事项
这道题属于一类非常经典的母题型《竞争 vs 合作》范畴，这类题型出现的频率非常高，所以黄老师强烈推荐同学们背诵范文中的观点思路，以及好词好句。
对于这道题，同学们需要注意几点：
1.论述时不能遗忘题目中的核心词sports （有的学生回忆中包括children，所以黄老师范文某些段落中也添加了该词），单纯的变成合作或者竞争的好处坏处了。
2.对于双方不矛盾的discuss both题型，推荐写中立结论，即双方观点都正确，对于这道题来说就是：个人运动和集体运动对于孩子来说同等重要，因为对于他们来说，合作和竞争的能力都是必要的。
3.同学们请切记，因为题目中有比较级，所以我们的结论中一定要有对应的词同等重要（equally important），否则及其容易扣分。
4.对于discuss both views这类题型的官方推荐分段，黄老师在前天的视频课程中有讲解，同学们可以戳黄老师头像查看。
那么，带着这些思路，我们来看范文词汇 & 范文吧（范文由黄老师从英文期刊中摘抄好词好句写出，同学们可以放心背诵，绝非中式英语）
2
满分词汇/范文
2021.10.9真题
Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
满分词汇：
self-esteem n. 自尊
acknowledgment n. 承认
discipline n. 自律
self-restraint n.自控
collaborate v. 合作
selfless adj. 无私
mental toughness n. 精神坚韧
strong mindset n. 强大目标动力
hurdles n. 障碍
grander scheme n. 宏观来说
doggedly adv. 顽强地
Team Sports好处1：
Being part of a team, with a united goal, is an incredible way to connect with teammates and coaches alike. Contributing to a team, regardless of whether it’s a leadership position, will ultimately contribute to a boost in a child’s self-esteem and confidence. Being part of a team allows kids to give and receive praise, and receiving recognition from a teammate or coach shows acknowledgment for their effort and consequently will boost self-esteem.
Team Sports好处2：
Team sports require kids to be disciplined both tactically, mentally, and physically. In order to be successful in sports, children learn self-restraint, and how to behave in a controlled way during stressful situations. Good discipline and decision-making will help them in life situations to achieve goals and reach their full potential.
Team Sports好处3：
Each person on the team has their own skill and characteristics. Coaches typically put players in positions to support their ability. This teaches players how to collaborate as part of a group and work as a team. It also teaches them to work toward something that cannot be done alone, and at times be selfless.
Individual Sports 好处1：
Individual sports take mental toughness, which demand one to set personal goals, manage stress, build self-confidence, and develop focus. Team sports build comradery and group empathy, but it takes a strong mindset to compete—at any level—alone on the court. These hurdles, once conquered, make the benefits of individual sports plentiful.
Individual Sports 好处2：
Individual sports address different aspects of personal development. Children who participate in traditional and non-traditional solo sports—like tennis, swimming, rock climbing, cycling, or bowling—do not rely on teammates for motivation or performance assessments. They set and pursue their own goals. Bearing the responsibility for achievement, solo kids must push themselves to establish a healthy, competitive mindset. This can be as simple as setting small, obtainable goals, or in the grander scheme, it can mean doggedly pursuing more ambitious ones.
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雅思/PTE/CCL/多邻国 英语考试关注【雅培英语黄老师】官网：https://t.cn/AiRFlmvG ️ ipenglishmel
各位学霸们好，今天黄老师给大家带来本周（2021.10.9）雅思大作文真题 & 范文，本周考题如下：
2021.10.9真题
Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
1
题目分析/注意事项
这道题属于一类非常经典的母题型《竞争 vs 合作》范畴，这类题型出现的频率非常高，所以黄老师强烈推荐同学们背诵范文中的观点思路，以及好词好句。
对于这道题，同学们需要注意几点：
1.论述时不能遗忘题目中的核心词sports （有的学生回忆中包括children，所以黄老师范文某些段落中也添加了该词），单纯的变成合作或者竞争的好处坏处了。
2.对于双方不矛盾的discuss both题型，推荐写中立结论，即双方观点都正确，对于这道题来说就是：个人运动和集体运动对于孩子来说同等重要，因为对于他们来说，合作和竞争的能力都是必要的。
3.同学们请切记，因为题目中有比较级，所以我们的结论中一定要有对应的词同等重要（equally important），否则及其容易扣分。
4.对于discuss both views这类题型的官方推荐分段，黄老师在前天的视频课程中有讲解，同学们可以戳黄老师头像查看。
那么，带着这些思路，我们来看范文词汇 & 范文吧（范文由黄老师从英文期刊中摘抄好词好句写出，同学们可以放心背诵，绝非中式英语）
2
满分词汇/范文
2021.10.9真题
Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
满分词汇：
self-esteem n. 自尊
acknowledgment n. 承认
discipline n. 自律
self-restraint n.自控
collaborate v. 合作
selfless adj. 无私
mental toughness n. 精神坚韧
strong mindset n. 强大目标动力
hurdles n. 障碍
grander scheme n. 宏观来说
doggedly adv. 顽强地
Team Sports好处1：
Being part of a team, with a united goal, is an incredible way to connect with teammates and coaches alike. Contributing to a team, regardless of whether it’s a leadership position, will ultimately contribute to a boost in a child’s self-esteem and confidence. Being part of a team allows kids to give and receive praise, and receiving recognition from a teammate or coach shows acknowledgment for their effort and consequently will boost self-esteem.
Team Sports好处2：
Team sports require kids to be disciplined both tactically, mentally, and physically. In order to be successful in sports, children learn self-restraint, and how to behave in a controlled way during stressful situations. Good discipline and decision-making will help them in life situations to achieve goals and reach their full potential.
Team Sports好处3：
Each person on the team has their own skill and characteristics. Coaches typically put players in positions to support their ability. This teaches players how to collaborate as part of a group and work as a team. It also teaches them to work toward something that cannot be done alone, and at times be selfless.
Individual Sports 好处1：
Individual sports take mental toughness, which demand one to set personal goals, manage stress, build self-confidence, and develop focus. Team sports build comradery and group empathy, but it takes a strong mindset to compete—at any level—alone on the court. These hurdles, once conquered, make the benefits of individual sports plentiful.
Individual Sports 好处2：
Individual sports address different aspects of personal development. Children who participate in traditional and non-traditional solo sports—like tennis, swimming, rock climbing, cycling, or bowling—do not rely on teammates for motivation or performance assessments. They set and pursue their own goals. Bearing the responsibility for achievement, solo kids must push themselves to establish a healthy, competitive mindset. This can be as simple as setting small, obtainable goals, or in the grander scheme, it can mean doggedly pursuing more ambitious ones.
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【惊呆！搬走几年后，男子突然收到前房东来信: 卖房赚钱了分点给你....看完暖哭了！】
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通常情况下，房东和租客的关系就像是自古以来的婆媳关系一样，水火不容？！
不过也有例外，近日一名美国男子突然接到房东电话，说要给他分点卖房得来的钱...
来自美国马诸塞州男子Chris Robarge便是一个超级幸运的人，因为他遇到了一个超暖心的房东。
前不久，Robarge在脸书上分享这个令人动容的故事。
全文阅读：https://t.cn/A6MoMvbi
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通常情况下，房东和租客的关系就像是自古以来的婆媳关系一样，水火不容？！
不过也有例外，近日一名美国男子突然接到房东电话，说要给他分点卖房得来的钱...
来自美国马诸塞州男子Chris Robarge便是一个超级幸运的人，因为他遇到了一个超暖心的房东。
前不久，Robarge在脸书上分享这个令人动容的故事。
全文阅读：https://t.cn/A6MoMvbi
#澳大利亚##墨尔本##猫本在线##澳洲##悉尼##珀斯##阿德莱德##布里斯班##吉朗##塔斯马尼亚##塔斯在线#
【墨尔本全科诊所被曝“非法买卖豁免证明”！社交媒体大肆招揽顾客，门前排起抢购长龙，当局：严办黑心GP！】
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据Herald Sun消息，因担心非法提供的疫苗接种豁免证明会对社会造成严重的影响，维州卫生当局正在对墨尔本的医生进行严格的检查。
据悉，在过去一周，通过医生获取非法豁免证明的现象大大增加，某些行业的从业者希望在不接种疫苗的情况下也能继续工作。
澳洲皇家全科医师学会警告称，非法提供疫苗接种豁免证明可能会破坏疫苗推广和豁免流程，因为只有极少数群体符合豁免的资格。
维州卫生部对墨尔本西部的某家全科医生诊所给予高度关切，据称最近几天这家诊所门前聚集着大量寻求豁免的患者。
维州当局发现，社交媒体上有帖子称，在墨尔本西部的全科医生诊所内能获得疫苗接种豁免证明，消息发出后，诊所楼前排满患者。
据了解，澳洲卫生执业者管理局、维州卫生部和维州警方均收到民众的举报。
维州卫生部表示，他们非常担心少数医生可能会向不符合豁免标准的患者提供疫豁免证明。
“我们正在调查GP违反卫生规定的事情，并准备积极考虑所有处理方式，包括整改、执法和监管等办法。”
RACGP主席Karen Price表示，越来越多的全科医生开始谈论有患者寻求非法豁免，医生们非常担心他们的同行会提供这样的豁免。
根据澳洲免疫技术咨询小组的建议，医生只能在极少数情况下为患者提供医疗豁免证明，如患者对疫苗的某个成分发生过敏反应，或者患者的免疫功能严重受损。
如果患者患有重大疾病，或因化疗而导致免疫功能低下，或感染新冠正在恢复期，那么这些是可以作为患者推迟疫苗接种的理由。
联邦卫生部周六表示，对疫苗有医学禁忌症的个人尚无法生成证明，例如疫苗数字证书。
墨尔本的全科医生表示，患者要求提供豁免证明，以便向雇主出示，使他们可以继续好好地工作，但是他们没有意识到需要遵循正规的、具有法律约束力的程序。
Werribee著名全科医生Joe Garra表示，在过去一周的时间里，寻求豁免证明的患者显着增加，而且自某些行业强制要求员工接种以来，民众的抗拒也在加大。
Garra博士说：“有的患者在我这里看病30年，他们会向我要求获得豁免证明，但我不得不拒绝他们。”
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据Herald Sun消息，因担心非法提供的疫苗接种豁免证明会对社会造成严重的影响，维州卫生当局正在对墨尔本的医生进行严格的检查。
据悉，在过去一周，通过医生获取非法豁免证明的现象大大增加，某些行业的从业者希望在不接种疫苗的情况下也能继续工作。
澳洲皇家全科医师学会警告称，非法提供疫苗接种豁免证明可能会破坏疫苗推广和豁免流程，因为只有极少数群体符合豁免的资格。
维州卫生部对墨尔本西部的某家全科医生诊所给予高度关切，据称最近几天这家诊所门前聚集着大量寻求豁免的患者。
维州当局发现，社交媒体上有帖子称，在墨尔本西部的全科医生诊所内能获得疫苗接种豁免证明，消息发出后，诊所楼前排满患者。
据了解，澳洲卫生执业者管理局、维州卫生部和维州警方均收到民众的举报。
维州卫生部表示，他们非常担心少数医生可能会向不符合豁免标准的患者提供疫豁免证明。
“我们正在调查GP违反卫生规定的事情，并准备积极考虑所有处理方式，包括整改、执法和监管等办法。”
RACGP主席Karen Price表示，越来越多的全科医生开始谈论有患者寻求非法豁免，医生们非常担心他们的同行会提供这样的豁免。
根据澳洲免疫技术咨询小组的建议，医生只能在极少数情况下为患者提供医疗豁免证明，如患者对疫苗的某个成分发生过敏反应，或者患者的免疫功能严重受损。
如果患者患有重大疾病，或因化疗而导致免疫功能低下，或感染新冠正在恢复期，那么这些是可以作为患者推迟疫苗接种的理由。
联邦卫生部周六表示，对疫苗有医学禁忌症的个人尚无法生成证明，例如疫苗数字证书。
墨尔本的全科医生表示，患者要求提供豁免证明，以便向雇主出示，使他们可以继续好好地工作，但是他们没有意识到需要遵循正规的、具有法律约束力的程序。
Werribee著名全科医生Joe Garra表示，在过去一周的时间里，寻求豁免证明的患者显着增加，而且自某些行业强制要求员工接种以来，民众的抗拒也在加大。
Garra博士说：“有的患者在我这里看病30年，他们会向我要求获得豁免证明，但我不得不拒绝他们。”
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